More like this pls

Great story, it was almost perfect when sleeping. Entertaining, peaceful and calm.
There is a small issue, when the story is separated in two, breaking the pace, and the end when you did your promotion (I wanted to sleep right after I've listened in my bed ^^' )
Also, when it comes about how the story is tell, I didn't have the same pace of the grow the story has, it would be better to have landmark to not get lost when she explain where she is constantly.